Showing posts with label MPP. Show all posts
Showing posts with label MPP. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Fantastical Respite From the Unexamined Life

The current media equation is to dramatize and sensationalize the news. Many reporters quote policy makers, bolstering their reputations by reporting the official lines of the day as truths, only to subvert these professional figures with scandalous narratives when the publication next goes to press. Reporters are taught to keep their opinions far away from their words, assuming that it is possible to remain objective in situations where fellow human beings are involved. However, they are also expected to practice common sense in terms of what to report and whom to speak with. Again, under the assumption that this, by no means, involves a subjective move.

W. Lance Bennett, in his book News: The Politics of Illusion, names this public information cycle the “authority-disorder bias.” Narratives in the news are constructed of “generic plot elements,” or “versatile and tireless themes that can be combined endlessly within personalized, dramatized, and fragmented news episodes” writes Bennett. The news seeks to restore order, argues Bennett, yet where the political landscape was once successfully “normalized,” now “the news increasingly finds ways to challenge the pronouncements of officials and the presumption of order in society.” 

As entertainment and information companies begin to drop away one by one, as these and other companies continue their pursuit of a golden system to garner the highest ratings, and as the noise generated by an ever-growing number of media outlets, fueled by bright technology and attractive people, reaches a crescendo, a quieter and less aggressive presence asserts itself behind the expensive cameras, thick makeup and years of journalistic experience, seasoned in the field and the newsroom. They are the personal blogs.

An editor at the Seattle PI recently told me of the unique opportunity the Internet begets for the literary-minded journalist. “Forget the inverted pyramid,” he said with defiance. Instead, the story should flow like a proper narrative. To draw the reader in and establish a personal connection is necessary for building an Internet readership. To create the seamless flow of ideas like the literary “page turner” may seem surprising coming from the mouth of a news editor at a major newspaper, but the plummeting popularity of hard-news style newspapers demands a change. In trying to move a daily print operation to an online only business, these ideas are at the front of this journalist’s mind.

Where has the personal relevance gone? Where has the background information necessary to truly understanding a local, national or international event or phenomenon been hiding? To what has citizens’ sense of accountability and consciousness been directed? Focused so intently on the highs and lows of human life, the bulk of a person’s thoughts, actions and interactions are all but overlooked, swept under the table and thus forgotten.

It is time to shift our definitions of entertainment—as well as the self-definition and world understanding found therein—away from fragmented, climactic moments and toward a less elitist aggregation of collective understanding. In short, we must find the commonplaces upon which seemingly disparate communities may connect.

Dwelling places—as blogs are—have the capacity to evoke what fragmented reality-based experiences can’t establish on their own. These worldviews [or dwelling places] are occupied and shared everyday with those at work and at home and at the store. Blogs have the ability to create these dwelling places in a less ephemeral manner—as symbols and as commonplaces upon which people in varied geographic locations, occupations and ages may converse.  The dwelling places, by definition, hold patterns of behavior where people are able to negotiate their own identities. To do this they build expectations for how certain qualities should look, thus constructing a framework for how the qualities appear in the day to day.

To look at the qualities that create places—an expert or competent voice, the rhetor’s goodwill toward the audience and their own liability in terms of character—founds this idea of blogs as dwelling places. The subject of a blog, then, can be anything from the mundane to the outlandish. Rituals themselves, in fact, can function as dwelling places. Oftentimes, the ritual aspect of the day-to-day becomes the sole narrative of personal blogs. The blog format itself begets extreme personalization. Most authors use the first person to address their audience, speaking with them as if across the kitchen table or in step arm in arm down city streets.

All writers, public personas and, for that matter, people in general must establish their ethos when stepping before an audience. This other could be as informal as a new friend or co-worker, or as official as a professor in front of her students, a journalist, or world leader. Part of one’s ethos indeed lies in the situation where confronting the other—setting, time of day, other people. Though much of the trust sought by the rhetor must be invented, created by the speaker herself in moments conducive to audience reception.

Using the first person holds a greater chance of establishing deep connections with the audience, as opposed to second and third which are more informal and barred, less personal.

***discussion of specific blogs here [?] Orangette, etc.***

It is important, however, not to become so immersed in a certain placated comfort, finding meaning all too easily without pushing oneself away from the accustomed daily rituals. David Foster Wallace put it quite extremely when he said, “It seems important to find ways of reminding ourselves that most ‘familiarity’ is meditated and delusive.” Yet, an ongoing critical examination and understanding of the ritualistic activities necessary for physical and psychic relief, in turn creating room for personal development, would not allow a sinking into blind, privileged comfort.

Wallace also noted that true freedom “means being conscious and aware enough to choose what you pay attention to and to choose how you construct meaning from experience. Because if you cannot exercise this kind of choice in adult life, you will be totally hosed.” He was speaking here about boredom, which some would argue is found in the daily rituals that make up the bulk of our life. “Properly handled, boredom can be an antidote to our national dependence on entertainment,” says D. T. Max in The New Yorker when interpreting Long Thing, Wallace’s third and unpublished book.” It is not by mere chance that critiques of fictional narratives are applied so easily when discussing the very real presence of personal blogs, of elevating the personal ritual to a place of significance.

Ella Ophir, in her essay Modernist Fiction and “the accumulation of unrecorded life”, suggests, through critic Erich Auerbach’s reading of Virginia Woolf’s work, that the personal narrative performs a service of human fellowship. “It is precisely the random moment,” he concludes, “which is comparatively independent of the controversial and unstable orders over which men fight and despair; it passes unaffected by them, as daily life. The more it is exploited, the more the elementary things which our lives have in common come to light.”

Blogs blatantly demonstrate foundational, defining elements of human behavior. They reinforce clihcés by way of their very intent: it’s not the destination toward which the blogger steps post by post, but the whole long, chronologically listed journey that counts. They function the way any newspaper or special interest magazine would, providing a temporary fantasy world in which to escape for a momentary lapse in reality-based spatial orientation. Indeed, the images transport the viewer to a place of beauty, of chicness, of shine and silent charisma, or to a world of high drama, international intrigue, war and other larger-than-personal-life narratives.

Like a camera projects film onto a blank canvas, blogs are a public screen onto which people’s fantasies shine. They out the mind’s inside with pages and pages of fairytale, of desire, of fulfillment. Pages and pages offering a moment’s respite from a stilled dullness, perhaps from sitting inside before a computer screen or from a windowless room, perhaps from some other lonely isolation. In this way, fantasy functions rhetorically—people are always looking for ways to cope. Ironically, that which most would wish to escape from—some daily banality inducing boredom—might just become the fantastical respite from the unexamined life.

At the end of the day, we are the meaning-makers, it is us who choose to believe any particular thing, us who consent to the flow or make a rapturous move against some mass or minute current. All of this, then, done in a process of finding our voice or trying to maintain some sort of continuance of this voice if ever thought to be found, perhaps modifying our voice to be in harmony or in opposition to the voices all around. By many methods, so we do this multi vaulted dance of tone and intent; in few moments do we realize a full shift in the Self, defined as that elusive “defining,” that marked revolving of time and space in one’s own direction that makes up so much of exalted thought and creative production and other such final unveilings. The million other thoughts and actions and observations are the true definers of character, the filling in of notes between crescendos, so important, foundational and necessary in their own right—essential to attaining some height of meaning, perhaps meaning for-themselves, in their own right, as is

Cover Letter

Fantastical Respite From the Unexamined Life

By Veronica Martin

Genre

Editorial/Opinion

Publication Venue

The New Yorker

Audience

Readers, writers, academics, bloggers, the intellectually inclined, journalists, media professionals—they are invested in communication and awake to current changes in how people seek information.

Brief Analysis

My main point in this opinion piece is to show how, by ascribing importance and devoting personal consciousness to the daily rituals common to all humans, a more inclusive community of increased awareness and understanding might be developed.

By tying this idea into the current state of mass media in the U.S.—which mediates Americans’ understanding of local, national and international events—I argue that the media is failing, along with citizen participation and understanding in political events, in part because of an entertainment business model: the authority-disorder bias defined by Bennett.

The subject and discussion is universal; I try to make this clear by showing the accessibility of the blogging medium and its dialogue-inducing potential. Furthermore, the actions of the American public as a whole have fueled the popularity of online communities as well as the dwindling interest in traditional print media.

By shifting to a more philosophical tone with Ophir and Wallace, I try to further this point about the sameness of humans and the possibility of finding common places to converse and dwell.

Finally, I establish my ethos as a writer by citing first hand experience with one such failing media outlet: the Seattle P-I.

Works Consulted/Cited

Bennett, Lance W. “News: The Politics of Illusion.” Pearson Education, New York: 2009.

Max, D.T. “The Unfinished,” The New Yorker, March 9, 2009. [http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2009/03/09/090309fa_fact_max?currentPage=1]

Ophir, Ella. “Modernist Fiction and ‘the accumulation of unrecorded life.’” Modernist Cultures, Vol.2, No.1, Summer 2006.

[http://www.js-modcult.bham.ac.uk/articles/Issue3_ophir.pdf]

Monday, February 23, 2009

MPP One.

Part I

Using my [soon to be earned] degree in Journalism as well as my experience working and writing in the field, both for the Spectator and currently with the Seattle PI would help to demonstrate credibility and authority on my issue. Having access to people with years of experience and diverse histories bringing them to the similar act of journalism, I’ve gleaned a few ideas and philosophies regarding writing for a public audience. In addition, I’ve spent a lot of time thinking about the intersection of blogging and more formal news publications. Actually, it is this point of intersection where my own two worlds and desires come crashing together, leaving only the option of attempting to rebuild something new from the marled and scalding rubble. Thus, I am personally invested in looking at how personal narrative becomes universally relevant—or at least finds audience in another human being.

An editor at the Seattle PI recently told me of the unique opportunity the Internet begets for the literary-minded writer. “Forget the inverted pyramid*,” he said with defiance. Instead, the story should flow like a proper narrative. To draw the reader in and establish a personal connection is necessary for building an Internet readership. To create the seamless flow of ideas like the literary “page turner” may seem surprising coming from the mouth of a news editor at a major newspaper, but the plummeting popularity of hard-news style newspapers demands a change. In trying to move a daily print operation to an online only business, these ideas are at the front of journalists’ minds.

Furthermore, and after much deliberation, I began a blog myself. I’ve written about my hesitation to enter the vast digital world of empty words and unfounded photos, trying to find meaning in this apparent human desire to express the personal self. Somehow I thought the desire was kept to the circle of writers and photographers and painters, whose life passion is this translation of experience into tangible communication. Perhaps all that was missing was the possibility of space to fill, a medium to enter—or the courage to find said outlet before the ease and proliferation of at-home Internet access and blogging start-up sites.

*The inverted pyramid is the most formal structure in which to compile a news story. The most pertinent and important information goes at the top, words are kept to a minimum, they are blunt and precise with little or no artistry. The paragraphs are like sound bites, able to be cut and moved around at will and without a need for transitions. Invented when wire services were often intercepted mid-transmission or travel, this style sought to cut losses by assuming that if someone seized the messenger while passing on the story, those on the other side of the country would still get enough of the message.

 

Character: In addition to what I’ve mentioned before, I could list other academic papers I’ve written and articles I’ve published.

Sense: Most people are informed about the Internet and have a general knowledge about blogging. It’s probably safe to say that most people under forty actively use the Internet for sources of news, entertainment and for social networking. A large percentage of this demographic might even have their own blog. However, many people, though aware, may not have the understanding of journalistic rules when it comes to the Internet, or the internal struggle in the industry when it comes to digital publication. Furthermore, the depth of the literary analysis cited in this paper is probably not everyday reading for most people. So I will adopt an inclusive voice to invite the reader into the thesis by taking care to connect abstract ideas with the day-to-day reality of personal blogs—a commonplace on which we may meet, depart from and continually refer to.

Goodwill: Most of the ways in which I will establish good sense will also establish goodwill. I will take care not to talk at or down to the audience when explaining concepts, but with them by showing them what I mean and how it is demonstrated. Mostly, though, my voice will be infused with the sincerity toward the reader established as part of good character. The subject itself begets inclusiveness, as I’m trying to bolster the significance of a daily life. 


Part II

Orangette, food blog:

Molly Wizenberg, the voice and life behind the experiences, tastes and photographs presented on her blog Orangette.

Shared Rhetorical Features

Since her beginnings as a food blogger in July of 2004, Wizenberg’s mini-essays have steadily grown in readership as demonstrated by the increase in the number of comments her words provoke. Some posts have, of course, drawn more than others, some seem to have marked turning points in the number of vocal readers. The highest number of comments rally around stories marking personal milestones in Wizenberg’s life: her marriage and subsequent dinner and honeymoon, announcing the publication of her first book and revealing she and her husband’s soon to be restaurant, Delancy. Her readers are thus stirred by the concrete events that make a life; they are fortified by the day-to-day musings, wit, personal memories and, of course, tastes making up the body of her blog.

 Effectiveness of Writing for Audience

Wizenberg’s words resonate with her readers on a very personal level. Whether she and her readers share tastes, experiences or geographic proximity, comments take the form of congratulations, laudatory remarks on writing style or simple agreement in a specific love for, say, lobster and San Francisco. Wizenberg is, at the most fundamental level, telling a story. But the difference between her blog and other personal narrative blogs is that she offers people the chance to physically and emotionally take part in her experience. She leaves them with something tangible and lasting, something that will come to fruition hours, days or months later when the craving for a certain butterscotch cookie or céléri rémoulade surfaces. And it’s not just the craving but the possibility of entering such a warm and inviting world that inspires the act of memory, in turn assuring Wizenberg her audience will come by next Monday when she again offers a chair to her table.

 Engaging Readers’ Emotions

Food is memorable and sensual and oftentimes seductive. Wizenberg elaborates on a taste by surrounding it with an inviting experience—often droll and sentimental with just enough irony to keep it respectable.

If you’ve been reading for a while, you may remember that I have a thing for celery root. It’s sort of the Philip Seymour Hoffman of vegetables: pale and a little scruffy, not exactly handsome by common definitions, but rippling, rippling, with integrity and talent. Vegetables can have integrity, right? And talent? I hope so, or else I’m going to have to find a new analogy, and that could take a while.”  

See full post here 

Rituals themselves can function as dwelling places, as does Orangette.  Oftentimes, the ritual aspect of the day-to-day becomes the sole narrative of personal blogs. The blog format begets extreme personalization. Wizenberg, like most blog authors, uses the first person to address her audience, speaking with them as if across the kitchen table or in step arm in arm down city streets [or through the bounteous farmers market stands]. She divulges memories of past loves, post-graduation anxiety, describes the difficulties of book writing and commemorates those influential to her life.

One afternoon, I remember, we pulled over at a rest stop in New Mexico and shared a slice of blackberry pie that we had bought earlier in the day, in Albuquerque. The wind was whipping my t-shirt around like mad, and my chest felt so tight and painful that I was sure, absolutely sure, that I was dying. Once we got to Oklahoma City, I knew, I would be diagnosed with some sort of rare, fatal condition and given only a few months to live, and everyone would take pity on me and send me back to San Francisco, where I would live out my final days in a Victorian with a view of the bay. It would be beautiful and tragic, not only because I was only 22 and had never had a real boyfriend, but also because I would probably die in the summertime, when there is no fresh Dungeness crab.”

See full post here. 

Finally, Wizenberg’s use of photographs—all taken by her and becoming progressively more professional from year to year—is essential to her stories. They are the lighting to her sentence framed settings—a grey afternoon with tea, cookies and a pile of ruddy old books, a candle-lit table cloth anticipating the arrival of good friends and cream of scallop soup to celebrate new year’s eve. Offering a glimpse of her table, her kitchen, her front porch, the soft colors and somewhat blurry lines in the photographs enhance her writing with orienting subtlety.  

Thursday, February 12, 2009

Claim: Ordinary Things as Worthy of Study

Blogs have the potential to act as stimulants --space to fill--for cultural and artistic creativity as Dijck argues in her essay. By functioning as sites in which to practice the necessary act of constructing personal narratives, they are a legitimate and fertile realm of social/cultural study.